Saturday, June 28, 2008

Can't u see the tears


Cant u see the tears in my eyes,
Cant u see the pain i am going thru,
Cant u see the pieces of those broken dreams,
Those broken promises still tear my heart apart,
Dont u know i cant live without u, I will never not need u,
I will never not miss u,
I will never not meet u in my dreams,
But ONE DAY I WILL HATE U
As much as I LOVE U...

3 comments:

@nshul said...

all these lonely silent tears...
creating a sound tht no one can hear....
piercing my heart with a bladed spear..
ur feelings r generous & crystal clear..
i can only wish u good luck my dear.....
.....


jst smthin tht i wnted to write.....dnt take me wrong....

Anonymous said...

Hi,
Neha, this is Shiv kumar from Una.I have been read your posts.I felt that anyone has been broken your heart. Dear Neha " There is nothing to explian, but something remains unexplianed till end".
True love is a sacred flame
That burns eternally,
And none can dim its special glow
Or change its destiny.
True love speaks in tender tones
And hears with gentle ear,
True love gives with open heart
And true love conquers fear.
True love makes no harsh demands
It neither rules nor binds,
And true love holds with gentle hands
The hearts that it entwines.
I have also a Blog http://shivraj-una.blogspot.com
please visit and left your precious comments on it. Thanks

Anonymous said...

hmmm.... nice wording... if u dont mind i wuld lik to say tht... if v luv sum1else .... as much as u describe in ur lines ..... afterwards.... no1 hav guts to hate d same persons .........

nywys ur ryting skill is too good .. keep trying ..